Bonjour, j'ai une pratique de rédaction en anglais sur le texte d'opinion. pouvez-vous me dire si mon body est bien développé. Merci
Sujet : is honesty the best policy
Thesis without a doubt, honesty is the best policy.
Body :
First, honesty provides peace. (topic sentence) In the text written by Eric, when a person lies, guilt can weigh heavy on the person's heart. In this case, telling the truth or being honest is the best policy because it prevents the person feeling guilty. Clearly, being honest causes less stress and it gives peace. Obviously, if I have a bad grade and I decide to tell the truth to my parents, I will not feel guilty because I have nothing to hide. In addition, Eric says telling being honest makes people feel comfortable. Naturally, when i am honest, i feel comfortable because I have close ones to comfort me.
Secondly, honesty is rewarding. (topic sentence). Have you ever felt happy after doing a good thing? In the text written by Eric, when a person is honest, the person can be rewarded. In fact, he could be rewarded emotionally. The truth always makes a person more confident. Clearly, the person gets more confidence. I think it's a good thing, because i always feel more confident when I tell the truth. In addition, in the text written by eric, honesty can provide a closer relationship, and this is rewarding. For example, when a person tells the truth, other people trust them more. Clearly, when I say to my mother i made a mistake, she will appreciate my honesty. As a result, our relationship gets closer.
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Dans l'ensemble, ton texte me semble bien.
Dans ton premier paragraphe, je te suggère de revoir cette phrase : « Eric says telling being honest makes people feel comfortable. » Une erreur semble s'y être glissée! :)
Dans ton deuxième paragraphe, tu sembles répéter des éléments sans nécessairement ajouter des informations. Ce serait peut-être à revoir.
« when a person is honest, the person can be rewarded. In fact, he could be rewarded emotionally. The truth always makes a person more confident. Clearly, the person gets more confidence. »
Si tu souhaites revoir certaines notions en lien avec le body paragraph d'un texte argumentatif, je te suggère de consulter la fiche suivante :
N'hésite pas à nous réécrire si tu as d'autres questions! :)
Marilee
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