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OrMagnifique556

Allo you told me to :

Verify the punctuation.

Is it only nowadays that teenagers express themselves with clothing? Was fashion not important 10, 20 or evenr 40 years ago?

I modified my introduction

Are you aware that fashion has always been super important for teenagers? They love expressing themselves through their clothes and often spend a lot of time thinking about what to wear in the morning. But with uniforms, they do not have to worry about that and could save some time. So, I disagree with the idea of abolishing school uniforms.

Laurie C

Hi!

At the end of my answer, I also said to make sure all the part of the introduction are there (the same as in French). In your introductions, there is no « sujet divisé » that indicates the reasons you think shcool uniforms should be abolished,

I suggest you read the notion sheets I recommended to help you! :D

Laurie :)