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Bonjour, j'ai un prompt en anglais et j'aimerais savoir s'il est bon.

le sujet:Research 10 tips that experts advise as the best ways to recover from a breakup.

There is no rule book on how to get over a breakup. After the relationship, people often report feeling loneliness, a loss of a sense of self, distress, and depression. Experts and people have recommended ways one can recover from a breakup. 

One very well-known way is finding a therapist who can help you get out of this situation by talking to her. In other words, get it off your chest. Reconnecting with things that make you happy is a way to show yourself that you don’t need your boyfriend/girlfriend to be happy. For example, going out with your friends or baking can help. People have always asked themselves how long it takes to recover from a breakup. Sadly, there is no answer to this question, only patience. Burning all memories you have of your ex would help you get rid of all this sadness. When you look at the flames invading your ex’s stuff, it’ll make you feel better. Changing your space is also important because some specific places in your room could trigger a memory. Taking care of yourself. After a breakup, many people have insomnia and compromised immune function. To keep this from happening, you have to continue doing what you used to do before the breakup. Also, focusing on your positive qualities is important. In some breakups, the couple tells each other some negative things about each other, which after a couple of days causes reflections to see if what their ex is telling is true or not. Avoiding your ex for a while. Meaning that you’ll have to remove him from any social media, it will help you to get rid of any physical reminders. Also, taking some time off from dating. It’s important at some point you’ll think that you can’t do anything on your own, but you have to prove yourself wrong. Finally, listening to your emotions. It is the most important thing in your progress. 

Merci et bonne journée

Laurie C

Bonjour!

Il me semble, après avoir lu rapidement, que ton texte est bien écrit. Pour être certain qu'il correspond aux critères de ton enseignant, je te suggère d'utiliser la grille de correction (si tu l'as) ou la feuille de consigne et cocher les éléments qui sont présents dans ton texte. :)

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Laurie :)