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Bonsoir,

mon devoir d’anglais est d’écrire un titre pour school magazine et d’écrire un petit texte pour expliquer pourquoi ce titre est bon. Est-ce que vous pouvez m’aider à corriger mes fautes grammaires, SVP?

Merci et bonne soirée,

Dildora.

The assignment

Part 1 - Title Competition

- You need to come up with an original title for the magazine/newspaper.  

- You need to write a 100 - 250 word marketing pitch to sell your title to your classmates.

- You must submit a written copy to Mr. Migliara by Friday, December 10th.  

- The audience for the Magazine/Newspaper is your school (ESMR).

- The Magazine will offer commentary on a broad range of topics:

(i) Arts & Culture

(ii) Politics

(iii) Current Events

(iv) Sports

Ce que j’ai écrit

Title: One For All

explanation: The title that I gave my school magazine is One For All. Personally, I think this title is very fascinating and interesting because different people will have different interpretations of it.  If somebody doesn't know the meaning of this expression, then he or she will think that this title means a magazine that contains all the topics relative to school life, such as art & culture, politics, current events and sports. If somebody knows this expression which signifies each individual should act for the benefit of the group, then he or she will understand that this title presents the altruism value of the IB program of our school. So, this is why I wrote One For All for the magazine title and I hope all of you like it.

Océane D

Bonsoir à toi !

Merci pour ta question. :)

Il n'y aucune erreur de grammaire dans ton texte, bravo !

N'hésite surtout pas à nous réécrire si tu as d'autres questions.

Océane :)